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  You slumped on the porch bench, staring out at the heavy rain. You were just a little too lazy to walk all the way upstairs to your bed. Your eyes grew heavy and you soon dozed off. The cold rain dripped from the roof onto the bushes in front of the porch. There were no sounds except for the pouring water. Suddenly, you felt something wet and rough against the back of your right hand. "Huh?" you mumbled, groggily looking down to see a small golden retriever puppy. It gave a few yaps, ran around in circles and dashed off the porch. You raised an eyebrow, wondering if it was trying to get you to follow it. Sighing, you grabbed a large umbrella and opened it up. "I'm coming, I'm coming" you muttered, following the golden dog. The puppy yapped as he walked, looking back to make sure you were following every now and then.

  The puppy finally stopped, barking quite loudly, which made you irritated. You sighed and looked up to where the dog had lead you. There was a young boy with shaggy blonde hair and an ahoge sticking up. He was huddled against the alleyway's wall, trying to keep warm. Your eyes widened a bit. "H-hello" you greeted, kneeling down to meet his gaze. The boy backed up a bit, averting his eyes away. "Hi" he mumbled shyly. "What's your name?" You ask gently, smiling. The boy looked up with dull eyes, and sighed. "Alfred. What's yours, miss?" he asked back, raising an eyebrow. Usually, no one payed attention to him. If an adult spotted him in the alleyway, they would simply pass by. Why were you taking the time to acknowledge him? "Just call me ___, none of this 'miss' business. Is this your doggy? he lead me over here. Don't tell me you're alone, are you?" you asked. "He's my best friend. I was kicked from home because...they didn't want me. They were going to send me to an orphanage" Alfred explained. Tears spilled from his eyes and he covered his face between his hands. Seeing this boy cry made you die a little inside. The puppy whimpered, licking Alfred's cheek comfortingly. You gently removed his hands away from his tear-stained face and smiled. "You can stay with me, how about that, Alfred?" you asked. The boy shook his head. "You're going to g-get rid of me like they did! You're going to abandon me and my friend!" he cried out. You didn't flinch or move away, instead, you pulled him in for a hug. "I would never. Both of you can stay with me for as long as you want" you whispered, rocking him back and forth in the embrace. Alfred's eyes lit up suddenly and buried his face into your neck. "Okay" he whispered back. His eyes slowly closed and he drifted off into sleep.

  "Poor kid must be exhausted" you mumbled to yourself, taking your umbrella in one hand and carrying Alfred in the other. his your puppy let it's tongue loll out in happiness, following you out into the rain. When you arrived home, you set the boy on your bed gently and covered his body with a warm blanket. Smiling, you kissed his forehead and set a little blanket on the floor for the puppy. The dog circled around it 3 times and finally settled down.

~Later that night~

  "Thanks" Alfred said, scarfing down the hamburger on his plate. You had suggested to order chinese carry out, but Alfred kept insisting on burgers. He licked his lips and gave a toothy grin. "This is the best!" he shouted in happiness, fist pumping the air. You chuckled, taking a bite of your hamburger. "You know, Alfred, if all you want is fast food, that could help my budget" you joked, but Alfred only grinned at the idea. "Chester likes his dinner too!" he said, pointing to the puppy who gobbled down the dog food. You simply smiled in reply, deep in thought. Alfred's true personality had shown quickly. He was suddenly much more happier and brighter. It made you feel that you had a son. Right when you were having that thought, Alfred's voice snapped you out of it. "Hey, ___...Is it okay if I call you mom?" he asked hesitantly. He looked unsure and nervous. "Of course you can, Al" you said, grinning now. His smile got wider and he laughed. "Really? That's cool! I have a mom!" he said, staring at you with his beautiful blue eyes.

~Timeskip to a year and a half later~

  "Mom!" Alfred called out. He ran as quickly as his legs could take him, slamming open your room door. "What is it Al?" you asked, wide eyed in surprise. "It's Chester". You both rushed downstairs to see Chester, who barked a bit softly in your presence. You slowly walked up, mouth opening a bit in surprise. There, curled up against the dog, were 4 puppies. "I don't think Chester's a boy".
Thanks to :iconschwer-von-begriff: 's Hetalia Reader-Insert Generator, I came up with this story. Surprisingly by luck (I kid you not), I got a lot of options that worked well. Hetalia and the characters (except the reader) do not belong to me~! Pic was found on Tumblr. :iconrlytearplz: I got so excited I wanted to work on it right away, but there were so many plot lines that could go with this. Damn my imagination ;-; Here are the things I picked in order.
Types: Child!country x reader
Setting: While It's Raining
Genre 1: My Choice (I chose Hurt/comfort)
Genre 2: Fluff
Object: A dog
Good Personality Trait Of Reader: Accepting
Bad Personality Trait Of Reader: My choice, THANK THE LORD (I chose lazy)
Character: America
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DumboDoesDeviant Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Alfie: Where do babies come from, mommy?
Me: U-um.. HEY ARTHUR GET YOUR BLOODY BUTT OVER HERE
Arthur: What is it, you bloody annoying git?
Me: Tell him where babies come from.
Arthur: *thinks* O-oh well you s-see um.. th-there's thing called the birds and the bees, and.. and.. the bees sting the birds and the birds find a mystical plant th-that only they can find when they're stung and then a baby appears in a blanket and the magical stork comes in and takes the baby and l-leaves on a married couple's door step!
Me: *whispers to Arthur* That's kind of believable. But just you wait until he grows.
Alfie: Ohhh that's cool! Lemme tell my bro Mattie! *tells Mattie*
Mattie: ...That's not what France told me...
Alfie: What did he tell you?
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JamalKitten Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016
IVE SEEN A MMD FOR THIS SEARCH IT ON YOUTUBE XDXDXD
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Derplicious Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016
It's BeautifulXD XD XD 
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Apia123 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Student Writer
Omg. I'm dying right now.
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DumboDoesDeviant Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
XD
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JustADeaviant Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
 "I don't think Chester's a boy"

ITS CHESTERA
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Daeyerus Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016
I love chibi America, he's so adorable 🙂
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Victoria-Walker925 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2015  Student Writer
Me: Er... I don't think Chester's a boy...
Alfie: Where do babies come from?
Me: *sweat drops* That's not something you're supposed to talk about until you're older... around like... 13/14.
Alfie: Okay.
Arthur: *nudges with elbow* Nice save, love.
Me: I had to think fast!
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theflamingphoenix666 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2016
Me: and where the fickle fragle did you come from?!
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Victoria-Walker925 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Student Writer
Me: *looks at tail, wolf legs, green scaled skin, wings, cat ears, and sharp teeth*
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Me: I honestly have no idea...
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theflamingphoenix666 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2016
Not you !Arthur! 
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:iconvictoria-walker925:
Victoria-Walker925 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2016  Student Writer
Me: *wraps arm on his shoulder* Magic!
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theflamingphoenix666 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2016
.....sure
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mybat Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015  Student General Artist
Me: Na sweetie Chester is not a boy....
Al: hey mom..where do babies come from?
Me:...O-O ask russia. *russia appears*
Hahah cute story!
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Urufugaru-Wolf-Girl Featured By Owner May 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
uhhhh IGGY WE NEED YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Artiscoolsoarecats Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Iggy: BIRDS AND TEH BEES TIEM *squeal*


*Twenty min later*

Iggy: And that's how babies are born~ uwu


Alfie: *Ded*





XD
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AQUAMARlNE Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015  Student Digital Artist
😄 Loved it! uvu Chester though--
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KittySutcliff Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015
There should be a part 2(
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LokisLove12345 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Aww. Soooo cute and kawaii. ^_^
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PokeKirby87 Featured By Owner Edited Feb 1, 2015
Hehe Libby be like:

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:iconawesomefaceplz: :iconfemaleplz:
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  Student General Artist
Wait... Does that mean Alfred's an uncle? Cool dude! Anyways, great job writer-chan!
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FoX-PoisoN Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh god the ending made my day!
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Rainbowuniverse500 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
America: Uh, what happend to chester mom?

Reader: I'll tell you when your older
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ScarletBlood1301 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014
HAHAHAHAHA!!! "I don't think Chester's a boy" HA!!!
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HALOCAT239 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Student Artist
💚💚💚💚💚👍😍😍😍😍😍
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TheChubbyGilbird Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww cuteness :3
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RubyBadAppleDream Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014
XD I like the ending
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LailaBuscus Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
O.O CHE-MS.CHESTER WHAT DID YOU DO?!!!!
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Inugirl115 Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
awww so cute!!
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ReikoTheJackal Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD CHESTER OMG HOW DID YOU HAVE CHILDREN WITHOUT A MATE D:
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PenumbraWolfy Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She met le stray :P
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ReikoTheJackal Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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xxgore123 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
It's so cute! I loved it! But, um.., since Chester is a girl, what's Alfred gonna name her? It'll be Chester, still?
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xXHetaNalaXx Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Loved it! c̶h̶e̶s̶t̶e̶r̶ ̶t̶h̶o̶ ̶o̶h̶ ̶m̶y̶ ̶g̶o̶s̶h̶
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animealx1231 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student Artist
so FLUFFY :iconamgtouchplz:
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Sanactras Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student
LOL

CHESTER. XD

I love this so much. XD
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KalishRalich Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student Writer
I Cried Reading This…
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HelenaTheCellery Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
:iconawkwardhugplz:
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KalishRalich Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student Writer
If I Cry To Something It Means Its Good Cuz It Is Rare To See Me Cry Over Things
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CupcakesRULETHEWORLD Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
'I don't think Chester is a boy' that line killed me XD
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nan5444 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Soo cute/fluffy!!grr...now I want marshmallow Fluff. Doubble GRR!!
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TheCorcinoIMC Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This was- is amazing, this made me smile, it brighten my day, thank you for makeing it :)
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PenumbraWolfy Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww not a problem! I'm so glad you like it ^-^
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ShadowAngel850 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013
Umm…you shall now be Charlotte
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Aero-Dragon Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so sweet! ^w^ 
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PenumbraWolfy Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for reading!
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Aero-Dragon Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! I enjoyed reading it. 
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Gekko73 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
Chester is now Charis! Chinese Zodiac: Dog emote 
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Gekko73 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
BTW. . .



PART 2!!!!!!
TARDring-ring-ring-ring-ring 
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Konakona321 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Part 2?..... Pretty Please? :iconchibiamericaplz:
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